Post by lac on May 16, 2007 18:55:42 GMT -5
This is the first in a 3-part series.
Garchomp based on me, pikchu based on Dj, Monferno based on Briggs, Snover based on my friend Michael, and Roserade based on my crush.(don't ask the name you will get no response)
Prolouge: Once many ages ago, pokemon all lived in peace on our half of the world. There were no evil pokemon, and no pokemon were discriminated against. That all changed 5 years ago, when the evil Dark pokemon came from the other side. They destroyed all the villages, including my own.
End of prolouge
I, Garchomp, am a commander of a rather small platoon consisting of Pikachu, Snover Moferno, and Roserade. We are heading out to get a good scouting point against the evil army, and I will try to raid the castle.
Pikachu: Are we there yet?
Snover: Pikachu, could you be anymore ignorant?
Me: Stop arguing! We're almost there and if they hear us, we're dead.
Monferno: Uh-oh...
Me: What?
Monferno: A Honchkrow!
Pikachu: I'll handle this!
Pikachu fired a huge thunderbolt at the Honchkrow, but it dodged it. Then Honchkrow went for Roserade, but I protected her from wing attack. Then I grabbed Honchkrow and Pikachu used thunderbolt and Honchkrow was killed. Then we burid the poor thing, we knew it was brainwashed and in a rage.
Roserade: That was close...Thanks Garchomp!
Me: You are a comrade. It was not a choice
She seemed hurt.
Me: But then again, I did choose you to be in this squad, didn't I?
That brought her spirits up.
Me: (whispers) Well then, let's go!
Everyone else: (whispers) Right!
TO BE CONTINUED....
Constructive Criticism, Please!
Garchomp based on me, pikchu based on Dj, Monferno based on Briggs, Snover based on my friend Michael, and Roserade based on my crush.(don't ask the name you will get no response)
Prolouge: Once many ages ago, pokemon all lived in peace on our half of the world. There were no evil pokemon, and no pokemon were discriminated against. That all changed 5 years ago, when the evil Dark pokemon came from the other side. They destroyed all the villages, including my own.
End of prolouge
I, Garchomp, am a commander of a rather small platoon consisting of Pikachu, Snover Moferno, and Roserade. We are heading out to get a good scouting point against the evil army, and I will try to raid the castle.
Pikachu: Are we there yet?
Snover: Pikachu, could you be anymore ignorant?
Me: Stop arguing! We're almost there and if they hear us, we're dead.
Monferno: Uh-oh...
Me: What?
Monferno: A Honchkrow!
Pikachu: I'll handle this!
Pikachu fired a huge thunderbolt at the Honchkrow, but it dodged it. Then Honchkrow went for Roserade, but I protected her from wing attack. Then I grabbed Honchkrow and Pikachu used thunderbolt and Honchkrow was killed. Then we burid the poor thing, we knew it was brainwashed and in a rage.
Roserade: That was close...Thanks Garchomp!
Me: You are a comrade. It was not a choice
She seemed hurt.
Me: But then again, I did choose you to be in this squad, didn't I?
That brought her spirits up.
Me: (whispers) Well then, let's go!
Everyone else: (whispers) Right!
TO BE CONTINUED....
Constructive Criticism, Please!
