The Great war-parts 2: A New Ally and 3

[lac]

BOOM! A thundering explosion sent the 5 of us flying back. We had just been fighting an Umbreon. He was very powerful, but we all could tell he didn't want to be evil.

Me: Wait! Umbreon stop!
Umbreon: What do you want?
Me: Do you really want to serve darkness and destruction? or do you want to join the light and help us against Darkrai alongside Arceus?
Umbreon: NO! Lord Darkrai is the only person that understands me! I'll never betray him!
Pikachu: When Darkrai finds you unescesary, he'll kill you or throw you in the cold.
Umbreon: LIES!!!!!

He sent a huge dark blast at us. It hurt. A lot.

Roserade: I have to talk to him! I'm good at stuff like this.
Me: Be Careful.
Roserade: OK.

She walked up to Umbreon and started talking.

Umbreon: (in a rough voice)What do you want ?!
Roserade: I need to explain something
Umbreon: (more gently) Go on.
Roserade: Listen. We're just trying to help. We've heard about what Darkrai will do if you say 1 wrong thing. It isn't pretty.
Umbreon: Fine. I'll help you. But if 1 thing, 1 THING, goes wrong, I'm not gonna take it and I'll run off with all the information to Darkrai.
Roserade: Alright. Let's go.
Umbeon: *thinking* She's the most beautiful creature I've ever seen. I think I'm somewhere I swore to myself never to go. In love.

She walked back with Umbreon and he couldn't stop looking at her. I thought that was a little strange. We walked a few miles and came across a cave.

Me: we'll set up a camp here, in case we needto retreat.
Monferno: I'll mnake a fire, but you have to pay me.
Me: Fine. *hands Monferno a 20*
Snover: I'll getsome berries for rations.
Roserade: I'll build a hut for hiding in
Umbreon: I'll help with the hut thing.
Pikachu: And i'll go spying in the castle.
Me: Alright. Everyone, get busy!

* about 45 minute's later* I keep overhearing Umbreon talking to Roserade, like he's known her for years

Umbreon: So what do you think of the hut?
Roserade: I think we did good.
Umbreon: *mumbling to self* How can I tell her?

Monferno, Snover, Roserade and Umbreon came up to me a little later.

Monferno: Well, the firs all ready, but I kinda fell asleep, so that's what took so long...
Snover: I got about 20 pounds of berries.
Roserade: The hut's done, too.
Me: Ok! We'll take a rest here till morning.
Everyone else: Ok!

*one day later*

Me: Morning, everyone.
Everyone but Umbreon: Morning.

Umbreon was standing up, and like always, staring at Roserade. I was starting to feel uncomfortable with that.

Me: Let's go and get Pikachu!
Everyone else: Ok!


News: I have decide the storyline I have planned is too big for 3 parts, so now there are 5.

Part 3 coming soon!

[Dj]

dude, where the frick am i?
did i get killed or sumthing

[lac]

you don't play a very big part in this one... but you get a HUGE thing in part 3! Made some changes. your in it more a little.

[Dj]

YAAAAY!

[lac]

(this story is from 3rd person point of view andis part three)

"Boy, am I screwed"Pikachu thought. Pikachu was in Darkrai's throne room, hiding behind a pillar.

Pikachu:*thinking* how am i gonna get outta here?
Darkrai:*to soldiers* I sense an intruder. Find him, and bring him to me.
Two murkrow: YESSIR!
Pikachu:*thinking* Oh, that's just what I needed!

Pikachu climbed up the pillar as fast as he could, but quietly. He got to the top, and saw one of the murkrow.

Pikachu:*thinking* Maybe I can at least get rid of one.

more of part three coming at ya soon!

[lac]

Continuatian!

Pikachu: *whispers* maybe I should just shove him.

Pikachu decided that wouldn't work, since they can fly. So instead he blasted it with a big shocky. It died.

Pikachu: YAY! *cups hands around mouth* oh crap did I say that out loud!?!?
Other Murkrow: Hmmmmm...

He flew up behind pikachu, but pikachu turned around and used spark to kill it. DUN-DUN-DUN!

continued soon!

[lac]

The End of part 3!


Darkrai sensed that his two murkrow were dead, so he sent a dark pulse through the whole palace. Pikachu nearly fell, and decided that he was gonna die unless he left.

Darkrai: I'll Kill you if you interrupt my ressurection of Giratina!
Pikachu: *thinks* Giratina? The one who nearly killed lord Arceus? Oh, no!

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Pikachu left the casle to see Garchomp and the others headed his way.

Pikachu: Guys, whatever you do don't go in there! Darkrai's going to-
Umbreon: Try to ressurect Giratina. I know.
Garchomp: WHAT?!?! GIRATINA!!!?
Pikachu: Hush you igit! He may hear us!

They went back to the cave.

TO BE CONTINUED

[Dj]

ok...

thats preety good

[lac]

yup.

[Dj]

ok... time to continue plz

[lac]

i makey new thread soon... I'm thining of what to put in it.